Abandoning vector idea and focusing on paper bird.
Tuesday's crit was fairly positive
Those who critiqued the work said it didn't seem quite resolved yet and there should be more attention on the colourful birds. So after Tuesday's crit, me and Will spoke with Jane, and decided to abandon the vector idea.
We concluded that the vectors didn't fully communicate the texture and pure beauty of paper.
However, Will and I are still keeping the black and white envelope. We also settled on the langage/tone of voice of the deliverables.
Example -
The grey envelope will have type on it saying "In a grey world, everyone needs a splash of colour"
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